Invitation wording help - Abbie! lol
Maddie&EthansMom wrote: I'm making my own birthday invitations.  Yes, I'm giving myself a birthday party. 
Tell me how this sounds or if it needs tweaking
Aimee's turning 31
and she wants you there
to shop and dine--
what a wonderful affair!
But at the stroke of midnight
the fun won't end
A hotel room has been reserved
for she and her friends.
moped replied: Sounds great to me - when can i expect the invite in the mail?? 
Where is the shopping and dining?
when is your birthday?
Maddie&EthansMom replied: It's going to be on the square downtown. We have great shopping down there...lots of unique boutique stores and antiques. We also have some really good food and neat bars. I had no idea how lively it was at night until my friend and I went down there a couple of weeks ago. That's when we started plotting and planning my birthday. We went ahead and reserved a table at my favorite restaurant down there (happens to have the best bartender!!) And we ordered 2 bottles of pink Veuve at a different bar, that happens to be below the hotel we are staying in. Of course we will end the night at that bar.  The hotel only has 14 rooms. The whole atmosphere down there is relaxing and casual. Everyone is really friendly and there really isn't a whole lot of traffic.
My birthday is the 19th of April. The party is on the 26th. I so wish you could come!!! It's going to be fun! 
Boys r us replied: I think it sounds great!!!! Will there be more details in the heart of the invite about the actual plans for the evening so people don't think you're having a tupperware party at home..lol
Maddie&EthansMom replied: Yeah.  I was trying to make it sound exciting. I will have to add more details
And I made a change to the last line. It will read: for Aimee and her friends
Calimama replied: Aimee's turning 31
and would love for you to join her
to shop and dine the night away
how wonderfully divine!
But at the stroke of midnight
the fun won't have to end
For a hotel room has been reserved
For Aimee and her friends!
PS I won't be offended if you hate it. Not really my forte.
punkeemunkee'smom replied: OK Here are my first 2 rough drafts....
Aimee is turning 31
She hopes you are inclined
To join her for a girl's night out
To laugh and shop and dine.
The best part is the fun won't end until the morning light
A hotel room has been reserved for all her friends that night!
The time has come to celebrate!!!
To shop and wine and dine.
A girl's night out-A get away
Doesn't it sound devine?
For when the clock strikes midnight
the fun has just begun
A hotel room has been reserved because
AIMEE IS TURNING 31!!!!!!!
It has been a long day  My skills are not real sharp right now! Call me and I can work the details into the wording! I mean since I so know I am invited anyway!
moped replied:
Ooooh I like the second wording - good work Abbie!
MoonMama replied: I'm bad about wording....but that sounds like so much fun.
coasterqueen replied: It should at least say "For her and her friends" the she is not grammatically correct. Sounds great though. How much fun!
lovemy2 replied: I don't really care how you word it - as long as the words, bar, hotel and out all nite are there I am sure they will come - I know I would
My2Beauties replied: Ooh I like the second one Abbie came up with.
sparkys2boys replied:
Maddie&EthansMom replied: I used the second one of Abbie's. And I made the cutest invitations shaped like purses.
Thanks again Abbie!!! 
redchief replied: Y'all are way too talented and creative.
punkeemunkee'smom replied:
No problem girlie! I hope you have a wonderful night! We will have to continue the festivities if you come down again this summer! 
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